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8 of 52 Weeks – Solemn Slumber

25 February 2014 No Comment

Writing a ‘natural’ death scene may come easily for some, but definitely not for me. Murder? Yes, that I can do. Suicide? Sure, not a problem. Emotionally wrecking, soul wrenching, machinations for dehydration?

Apparently not so much.

I’ve been going over my notes for my NaNoWriMo project in preparation for a hopeful finish in March. Unfortunately, this means sorting through a great many ‘sad’ things, as writing a death (a peaceful one, not accidental or murder) is a lot more difficult than I remember. In fact, it’s why I set the work aside in December… I just couldn’t write his death.

So here we have it, the bits and pieces that reflect my thoughts on the solemn slumber that is death. The first, of course and always, the poem my grandmother gave to me when my twin girls were born too prematurely to survive.

The Reaper and the Flowers
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

There is a Reaper, whose name is Death,
And, with his sickle keen,
He reaps the bearded grain at a breath,
And the flowers that grow between.

“Shall I have naught that is fair?” saith he;
“Have naught but the bearded grain?
Though the breath of these flowers is sweet to me,
I will give them all back again.”

He gazed at the flowers with tearful eyes,
He kissed their drooping leaves;
It was for the Lord of Paradise
He bound them in his sheaves.

“My Lord has need of these flowerets gay,”
The Reaper said, and smiled;
“Dear tokens of the earth are they,
Where he was once a child.

“They shall all bloom in fields of light,
Transplanted by my care,
And saints, upon their garments white,
These sacred blossoms wear.”

And the mother gave, in tears and pain,
The flowers she most did love;
She knew she should find them all again
In the fields of light above.

O, not in cruelty, not in wrath,
The Reaper came that day;
‘Twas an angel visited the green earth,
And took the flowers away.



The Day is Done
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

The day is done, and the darkness
Falls from the wings of Night,
As a feather is wafted downward
From an eagle in his flight.

I see the lights of the village
Gleam through the rain and the mist,
And a feeling of sadness comes o’er me
That my soul cannot resist:

A feeling of sadness and longing,
That is not akin to pain,
And resembles sorrow only
As the mist resembles the rain.

Come, read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling,
And banish the thoughts of day.

Not from the grand old masters,
Not from the bards sublime,
Whose distant footsteps echo
Through the corridors of Time.

For, like strains of martial music,
Their mighty thoughts suggest
Life’s endless toil and endeavor;
And to-night I long for rest.

Read from some humbler poet,
Whose songs gushed from his heart,
As showers from the clouds of summer,
Or tears from the eyelids start;

Who, through long days of labor,
And nights devoid of ease,
Still heard in his soul the music
Of wonderful melodies.

Such songs have power to quiet
The restless pulse of care,
And come like the benediction
That follows after prayer.

Then read from the treasured volume
The poem of thy choice,
And lend to the rhyme of the poet
The beauty of thy voice.

And the night shall be filled with music,
And the cares, that infest the day,
Shall fold their tents, like the Arabs,
And as silently steal away.




Last winter, I found out an old friend had died. We’d lost touch over the years; he the perennial bachelor and me the divorced single mom. For a lot of years during my relationship with my kids’ dad, I often wondered what if? What if… I’d chosen R. over J.? Would things have been different? I loved him hard as I could the first few years we knew each other, and then… it was done and we both moved on. Who knew?




Hope that wasn’t as traumatic for you as my kid will think it is… <|;^) Maybe you’ll be able to squeeze some inspiration out of these as well. *sniffles* <3 JL

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